Characters and Communication

Characters in novels do not need to follow the same strategies for good communication that we do; they'd be boring if they did. In books, we want to see emotions take over reason and heated exchanges. It's one of the most enjoyable things about reading. We can lose ourselves in the drama. But, do these players have to follow any rules?

Of course they do. Here are my top three communication rules for characters:

The first is, they must stay within the confines of the story. A writer can have a scatter-brained hero - but, a character's way of communicating, no matter how quirky or interesting, cannot derail the reader from the plot or cause unnecessary theatrics. Dialogue must fit seamlessly into the story-line and make sense within the setting.

Characters must listen, but not in the same way that people do. They can choose to respond, ignore, or interrupt, but they must stay within the constructs of their personality. In my book, Camouflage, Chief Dermott is not always going to listen politely to his superiors—they are going to have it out, but in a story we want that drama.

Lastly, a character's dialogue must sound seamless. People have an established way of speaking that tends to flow. This is even more important for characters in novels. Any communication that sounds unnatural can pull the reader out of the story. If you're a writer, reading the dialogue out-loud can help you detect awkward discourse.

We love outrageous characters, but even the most dysfunctional ones must adhere to certain guidelines. Fortunately, the rules we follow for good communication are different then the ones in books—giving those compelling players room to let loose.